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About Sanusi:

I am a graduate of geology who takes writing as a hubby.

Freelance Gig Allotted to Sanusi:

Joshua (a client) is working on a paper and needs to completely rephrase the paragraph below:

To say that classical music confers the perception of quality to consumers perhaps fails to consider the demographic variables. Indeed, Yalch and Spangenberg (1993) present the varying effects of different styles of music on various demographics. In another study, Wilson (2003) found that when classical music was played in a popular restaurant, it had the financially negative effect of significantly lowering the number of guests who bought three or more beverages, compared to when jazz or pop music was played.

Kindly submit an appropriate revision using the dialogue box below.

Sanusi’s Resolution:

“You can use any of the two:

1. Saying classical music speaks the perception of quality to consumers conceivably fail to consider the demographic variables. Indeed, Yalch and Spangenberg (1993) presents the varying effects of different styles of music on various demographics. Also, Wilson (2003) in a study found that when classical music was played in a popular restaurant, it had the financially negative effect of significantly lowering the number of guests who bought three or more beverages, compared to when jazz or pop music was played.

2. If demographic variables (personal statistics) are given consideration the perception of classical music being the quality to consumers will perhaps fail. Indeed, Yalch and Spangenberg (1993) presents the varying effects of different styles of music on various demographics. Also, Wilson (2003) in a study found that when classical music was played in a popular restaurant, it had the financially negative effect of significantly lowering the number of guests who bought three or more beverages, compared to when jazz or pop music was played”